Do you think traveling alone is good? Why?
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Traveling with friends, family is good but sometimes I must be good that traveling alone. When I\'m alone, I can do in my opinion. Without other\'s opinion, voices and meditation, I can make my decisions like where I want to go, what I want to eat and that time and which I want to stay at. And if the traveling place isn\'t your country , you can experience talking with foreigner. Because If you aren\'t alone, you must speak to your party.
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Let\'s try to fix your sentences:
Traveling with friends, family is good but sometimes I must be good that traveling alone.
>> Traveling with friends and family is good but sometimes I prefer to travel alone.
When I\'m alone, I can do in my opinion.
>> When I\'m alone I can do whatever I want to do.
Without other\'s opinion, voices and meditation, I can make my decisions like where I want to go, what I want to eat and that time and which I want to stay at.
>> Without other\'s opinion or meditation , I can make my own decisions like where I want to go, what I want to eat and where I want to stay at.
And if the traveling place isn\'t your country , you can experience talking with foreigner. Because If you aren\'t alone, you must speak to your party.
>> And travelling to other country, you can experience talking with foreigners, but if you are with someone you have to speak with your own language.
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