Do you think travelling alone is good? Why?

2019-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lea

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Do you think travelling alone is good? Why? i think that travelling alone is good. because travelling alone is only solitary,meditation time in our\'s life. but, for example, many people go to trip with their friends, familly, or cowoker, that is not bad. but they don\'t have time to stay alone! in trip, we are always seeing and listening something that doesn\'t make ourselfs thinking back. also family, friend too through \'travelling alone\', we\'ll find out our self, goals, the truth of life... etc.. that\'s why i think that travelling alone is good !

강사 첨삭

HI THERE [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework even though I know that you are very busy. I really appreciate it! :-)

Let\'s try to correct your sentences:

I think that travelling alone is good.

>>Correct.

because travelling alone is only solitary,meditation time in our\'s life.

>> because that is the time that you can meditate.

but, for example, many people go to trip with their friends, familly, or cowoker, that is not bad.
but they don\'t have time to stay alone!

>> But for example you travel with your friends, families or co-workers, it is not bad, but you don\'t have time to be alone.

in trip, we are always seeing and listening something that doesn\'t make ourselfs thinking back. also family, friend too

>> When we travel we always see and listen to something that we almost forget what we are thinking.

through \'travelling alone\', we\'ll find out our self, goals, the truth of life... etc..

>> Travelling alone is where we find our self and think for our goals and so on.

that\'s why i think that travelling alone is good !

>> Correct

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