Do you think vaccines are 100% safe?
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Any vaccines are not safe. I can\'t say all medicines are safe. If the corona vaccines comes out, we will take it, it won\'t be long. I think like flu vaccines, it will take few months. Probably we have a immune system in our body or we need to take it every year.
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>> Any vaccine is not safe.
I can\'t say all medicines are safe.
>> CORRECT
If the corona vaccines comes out, we will take it, it won\'t be long.
>> CORRECT
I think like flu vaccines, it will take few months.
>> I think it is like flu vaccines, it will take a few months.
Probably we have a immune system in our body or we need to take it every year.
>> Probably, we nee do to become immune of the virus after taking the vaccine or else, we\'re going to need it every year.
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