Do you think vaccines are important and effective?
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For sure, I thought the vaccines are important to increase your immune system in early COVID-19. But now, I sometimes saw people who got vaccinated were with COVID-19. So it doesn\'t matter. I think there is a time when you have to take care of your personal health.
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For sure, I thought the vaccines are important to increase your immune system in early COVID-19.
>> For sure, I think that the vaccines are important to increase your immune system against the COVID-10 virus.
But now, I sometimes saw people who got vaccinated were with COVID-19.
>>But now, I sometimes see people who still get the virus even if they are already vaccinated so I think it doesn\'t matter anymore.
So it doesn\'t matter.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
I think there is a time when you have to take care of your personal health.
>> CORRECT
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