Do you think vaccines are important and effective? Why or why not?
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I think that vaccines are important, but I think that some of vaccines are not that effective.
When I was young, I had flu vaccines a lot of times.
But I got a flu, and the vaccines were not that effective to me.
And so as Covid19 vaccines.
The government said that it is really effective, but I don\'t think that it is effective.
Because of these reasons, I think that we have to think about the vaccines again.
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When I was young, I had flu vaccines a lot of times.
But I got a flu, and the vaccines were not that effective to me.
And so as Covid19 vaccines.
Because of these reasons, I think that we have to think about the vaccines again.
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I think that vaccines are important, but I think that some of vaccines are not that effective.
>> CORRECT
When I was young, I had flu vaccines a lot of times.
>> CORRECT
But I got a flu, and the vaccines were not that effective to me.
>> Regardless of so, I still got the flu so I think it is not effective.
And so as Covid19 vaccines.
>> And so as Covid-19 vaccines.
The government said that it is really effective, but I don\'t think that it is effective.
>> CORRECT
Because of these reasons, I think that we have to think about the vaccines again.
>> CORRECT
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