Do you think veganism can help protect the environment? Why do you say so?
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I think veganism definitely can help protect the environment. For example, if we don\'t eat any beef, we can reduce greenhouse gases than before. Because a one cow normally generates greenhouse gases as much as a one car does.
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Thank you MS. [이름]!
~Lucy
I think veganism definitely can help protect the environment.
>>CORRECT!
For example, if we don\'t eat any beef, we can reduce greenhouse gases than before.
>>CORRECT!
Because a one cow normally generates greenhouse gases as much as a one car does.
>>Because a cow normally generates greenhouse gases as much as a car does.
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