Do you think visiting new places is more enjoyable alone or with others? or
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When I have been to visit
a new place alone,I was so careful and felt unfamiliar with there.
If I visit there with others, I will be curious about there.
And it will be more enjoyable.
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When I have been to visit, a new place alone,I was so careful and felt unfamiliar with there.
>> When I visit a new place alone, I try to be careful because it is unfamiliar to me.
If I visit there with others, I will be curious about there.
If I visit there with others, I will be curious about there.
>> If I visit any new place with others, I would be curious about that place.
And it will be more enjoyable.
And it will be more enjoyable.
>> It would be more enjoyable.
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