Do you think volunteer works can make you a better person?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think so. I have never volunteered before yet .When I have enough time maybe in my 50s or 60s, I will do that for sure. Helping people itself is always good for them and myself. Giving and taking affection each other creat a great deal of good energy, being happy altogether. It can play a role of happy virus. Moreover,for myself, I can boost up my satisfactory self-esteem through the experience. Also, I can be a good model for my two daughters. As a result, I can live with gratitude during the long journey of my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for making your homework, I appreciate it a lot.Enjoy the rest of your afternoon. ^_^
I have never volunteered before yet.
>>>I have never volunteered before.
Helping people itself is always good for them and myself.
>>>Helping people itself is always good for them and for myself.
Giving and taking affection each other creat a great deal of good energy, being happy altogether.
>>>Showing affection to each other creates a great deal of good energy and also you can be happy altogether.
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