Do you think watching animation is good for kids?
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I think watching animation is not problem because animation is fun but it\'s not good to see a lot.
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Do you think watching animation is good for kids?
I think watching animation is not problem because animation is fun but it\'s not good to see a lot.
>>> I think watching animation is not a problem because animation is fun, but it\'s not good to watch too much of it.
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