Do you think watching TV is educational?

2022-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Some programs don\'t be helpful maybe but I think watching TV is educational. In my childhood, it\'s hard to find someone who is not to watch TV and they learned about friendship, love, the behavior no one likes.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Some programs don\'t be helpful maybe but I think watching TV is educational. 

>> Some programs are not helpful, maybe, but I think watching TV is educational. 

In my childhood, it\'s hard to find someone who is not to watch TV and they learned about friendship, love, the behavior no one likes.

>> In my childhood, it\'s hard to find someone who doesn\'t watch TV, and they learned about friendship, love, and the behavior that no one likes.

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