Do you think watching TV is educational? Why?
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Yes, I do. These days they are good at making TV programs for the purposes of education, entertainment, or information. Through TV programs we can learn indirect experiences and they help children enlarge their comon sense and connect to school studying.
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Jean
Yes, I do.
>> correct
These days they are good at making TV programs for the purposes of education, entertainment, or information.
>> These days, there are many good TV programs created for the purposes of education, entertainment, or information.
Through TV programs we can learn indirect experiences and they help children enlarge their comon sense and connect to school studying.
>> Through TV programs, we can learn indirect experiences and they help children expand their common sense and connect to school studying.
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