Do you think we can ot do something about natural disasters?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that we have a lot of ways that we can do it.
I can prepare disaster prevention before. For example l can fix my house, I can prepare something that I need it when I suffer disaster. Always I can look daugerous place, and do without it.
But I think that most importent is we have to care our\'s earth. Earth is not eternally for us. Nowadays earth is getting sick. We damaged a lot of earth\'s everything. So we have to keep and care earth for us and our\'s future people.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [Name]!
I agree with you, we may not be able to save the Earth 100%, but we can \"slow down\" the destruction. People should unite in taking care of the earth for the next generation.
Have a great day!
See you later.
Aki~
I think that we have a lot of ways that we can do it.
>> CORRECT!
I can prepare disaster prevention before.
>>> I can prepare for disaster prevention before.
For example l can fix my house, I can prepare something that I need it when I suffer disaster.
>>> For example, l can fix my house, I can prepare something that I need when I suffer a disaster.
Always I can look daugerous place, and do without it.
>>> I can always check on dangerous prone places, and do without it.
But I think that most importent is we have to care our\'s earth
>>> But I think that the most important thing is we have to care the earth
Earth is not eternally for us.
>> CORRECT!
Nowadays earth is getting sick.
>>> Nowadays, the Earth is getting sick.
We damaged a lot of earth\'s everything.
>>> We have damaged a lot of the Earth\'s natural resources.
So we have to keep and care earth for us and our\'s future people.
>>> So we have to keep and care for the Earth for us and our future people.
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