Do you think we should all donate some of our salary to charity?
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There is a controvercy over whether we should all donate to charity. Some believe that we have to give our salary to charity because it is beneficial to the poor. On the other hand, others think that we all don't need to donate to charity since it is not mandatory things.
In my opinion, I agree with the opposite. Although I know that donation itself is a really good thing, it should not be mandatory since I think that it is required at least two elements in donating: the willingness and abundance. It can be like robbery if someone do not want to donate but give their money to charity. In addition, it rather will generate aother person who need to be given donation if those who is not abundant donate compulsorily.
I think that all people do not need to donate their some of salary. In other words, people who want to donate and have extra money for donation only give their some of salary to charity. This is more raesonable. It is not good to let people donate mandatorily.
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Good morning Miss. [Name]!
I agree with your opinion that helping should not mandatory. It should be done wholeheartedly. Thank you for sharing your insights. Have a beautiful day!^^
~Kelly^^
There is a controvercy over whether we should all donate to charity.
>> There is a controversy over whether we should all donate to charity or not.
Some believe that we have to give our salary to charity because it is beneficial to the poor.
>> Correct.
>> Some believe that we have to donate a portion of our salary to charity to help the poor people.
On the other hand, others think that we all don\'t need to donate to charity since it is not mandatory things.
>> On the other hand, others think that we all don\'t need to donate to charity since it is not mandatory.In my opinion, I agree with the opposite.
>> In my opinion, I agree with the latter.
Although I know that donation itself is a really good thing, it should not be mandatory since I think that it is required at least two elements in donating: the willingness and abundance.
>> Although I know that donation itself is a really good thing, it should not be mandatory since there are two things that we must consider before donating: willingness to give and abundance of wealth.
It can be like robbery if someone do not want to donate but give their money to charity.
>> It is like robbery if someone does not want to donate but give his money to charity.
In addition, it rather will generate aother person who need to be given donation if those who is not abundant donate compulsorily. >> In addition, it is like forcing someone to have a mandatory donation.
I think that all people do not need to donate their some of salary.
>> I think that all people do not need to donate some of their salary.
In other words, people who want to donate and have extra money for donation only give their some of salary to charity.
>> In other words, only the people who want to donate and have extra money should give to charity.
This is more raesonable.
>> Correct.
>> reasonable
It is not good to let people donate mandatorily.
>> Correct.
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