Do you think we should take care of our parents when they grow old? Is it a family duty? Answer in 5
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think we should take care our parents when get old. Because they protect us when we are young so we also give them protect
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You have the right idea.
We should always love and take care of our parents.^^
I\'m sure you do.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes, I think we should take care our parents when get old.
>> Yes, I think we should take care of our parents when they get old.
Because they protect us when we are young so we also give them protect.
>> Since they protected us from the time we were young, we also have to protect them when they get older.
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