Do you think we’ve become obsessed with technology?
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Yes. It will happen in the furture. I am in the middle of a project. The project is that if engineers enter information into an AI system, the AI determines values for the best results. The engineers utilize the values. Finding the values out is very difficult, but the AI can determine easily.
In the furture, it could happen in various ways. Making decision isn\'t easy. There are so many people who can decide easily. Maybe that kind of people want to follow decision. At first, it will be small things, and then it will be getting bigger.
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In the furture, it could happen in various ways.
- Teacher Angela
Yes. It will happen in the furture.
>> Yes, It will happen in the future.
I am in the middle of a project.
>> CORRECT
The project is that if engineers enter information into an AI system, the AI determines values for the best results.
>> The project requires engineers to input information into an AI system, which then determines the optimal values for the best results.
The engineers utilize the values.
>> The engineers utilize the values determined by the AI system.
Finding the values out is very difficult, but the AI can determine easily.
>> Finding the values is very challenging, but the AI can determine them easily.
>> In the future, it could occur in various ways.
Making decision isn\'t easy.
>> CORRECT
There are so many people who can decide easily.
>> There are many people who can make decisions easily.
Maybe that kind of people want to follow decision.
>> Maybe those kinds of people prefer to follow decisions made by others.
At first, it will be small things, and then it will be getting bigger.
>> At first, it will involve small things, but then it will gradually become more significant.
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