Do you think we will find an environmentally friendly alternative to plastic?
학생이 쓴 원문
These days, many environmental companies have tried to find things that can be alternative to plastic. In Korea, some coffee shops ban to use of plastic and paper cups when serving coffee or beverage to people. Instead of using plastic cups, they require customers to take their tumblers or bottles.
And plastic takes a longer time to be recycled compared to paper. So some coffee shops such as Starbucks provide paper straws instead of plastic straws.
Like this, the world has tried to reduce using plastic. Not only companies but also normal citizens should cooperate their trying.
강사 첨삭
Good Day Helena!
People are really doing something about the use of plastics, however, it will still depend if others will comply or not.
-T. Caitlyn
These days, many environmental companies have tried to find things that can be alternative to plastic.
>> These days, many environmental companies have tried to find things that can be an alternative to plastic.
In Korea, some coffee shops ban to use of plastic and paper cups when serving coffee or beverage to people.
>> In Korea, some coffee shops ban plastic and paper cups when serving coffee or beverage to people.
Instead of using plastic cups, they require customers to take their tumblers or bottles.
>> Instead of using plastic cups, they require customers to bring their tumblers or bottles.
And plastic takes a longer time to be recycled compared to paper.
>> Instead of using plastic cups, they require customers to bring their tumblers or bottles.
And plastic takes a longer time to be recycled compared to paper.
>> Plastic takes longer to decompose compared to paper.
So some coffee shops such as Starbucks provide paper straws instead of plastic straws.
>> CORRECT
Like this, the world has tried to reduce using plastic.
>> CORRECT
Like this, the world has tried to reduce using plastic.
>> CORRECT
Not only companies but also normal citizens should cooperate their trying.
>> Not only companies but also citizens should cooperate and comply.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.