Do you think we will use flying cars in the future?

2020-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I don’t know what will happen, but this will be possible 1-2 decades later. Actually, there are many companies eager to realize it. Last year, Hyundai, the biggest automobile manufacturer in Korea exhibited this concept’s object at a international motor show in the US and the director announced that they will make it up to 2030. Nonetheless, there are uncountable barriers to make it ture. The rotor to lift it in the air has to be powerful enough to manage not only for the weight of itself and passengers, also for keeping its secure operation in bad weather. The key to achieve their goal is that they have to satisfy the government and public on the safety matter. The concern has to be much more severely considered than conventional cars and flights. Flying cars will be usually operated above urban areas. If the accident happens falling onto houses or streets, this would be miserable. Though it seems untouchable, I believe that they will find all solutions to realize it .

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~Lucy

I don’t know what will happen, but this will be possible 1-2 decades later.
>>CORRECT!
Actually, there are many companies eager to realize it.
>>CORRECT!
 Last year, Hyundai, the biggest automobile manufacturer in Korea exhibited this concept’s object at a international motor show in the US and the director announced that they will make it up to 2030.
>>
 Last year, Hyundai, the biggest automobile manufacturer in Korea exhibited this concept’s object at an international motor show in the US and the director announced that they will make it up to 2030.
Nonetheless, there are uncountable barriers to make it ture.
>>Nonetheless, there are uncountable barriers to make it true.
 The rotor to lift it in the air has to be powerful enough to manage not only for the weight of itself and passengers, also for keeping its secure operation in bad weather.
>>
 The rotor to lift it in the air has to be powerful enough to manage not only for the weight itself and passengers, also for keeping its secure operation in bad weather.
The key to achieve their goal is that they have to satisfy the government and public on the safety matter.
>>CORRECT!
 The concern has to be much more severely considered than conventional cars and flights.
>>CORRECT!
 Flying cars will be usually operated above urban areas.
>>CORRECT!
 If the accident happens falling onto houses or streets, this would be miserable.
>>CORRECT!
Though it seems untouchable, I believe that they will find all solutions to realize it .
>>CORRECT!

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