Do you think weather affects the way people feel?
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I believe it depends on people. Well, there is someone who can be affected from the weather or not. For me, I tend to be done from the weather such as rain, gloomy, and snow. Especially, I really hate the day when it\'s rain and snow. You know, I have an eczema on my right foot. So, when it\'s rain or snow, it makes my foot more itchy [이름]ce I was military service. Even I have a medicine, it\'s too lazy to use on my foot after taking shower. :)
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I believe it depends on people.
>> CORRECT!Well, there is someone who can be affected from the weather or not.
>> Well, there is someone who can be affected by the weather or not.
For me, I tend to be done from the weather such as rain, gloomy, and snow.
>> CORRECT!Especially, I really hate the day when it\'s rain and snow.
>> Especially, I really hate the day when it\'s rainy and snowy.
OR >> Especially, I really hate the day when it rains and snows.
You know, I have an eczema on my right foot.
>> CORRECT!You know, I have an eczema on my right foot.
So, when it\'s rain or snow, it makes my foot more itchy [이름]ce I was military service.
>> So, when it\'s rainy or snowy, it makes my foot more itchy [이름]ce when I was doing my military service.
Even I have a medicine, it\'s too lazy to use on my foot after taking shower. :)
>> Even if I have a medicine, I feel too lazy to use it on my foot after taking shower. :)
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