Do you think weather affects the way people feel?
학생이 쓴 원문
If it is sunny, usally people feel happy. And when it is rainy, usally people feel sad and lonely and tired.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ella! Thank you for doing your homework today.
Your homework today implies that you agree that weather affects the way people feel.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>If it is sunny, usually people feel happy.
OR>>If it is sunny, people usually fell happy.
And when it is rainy, usally people feel sad and lonely and tired.
>>And when it is rainy, usually people feel sad, lonely and tired.
OR>>And when it is rainy, people usually feel sad, lonely and tired.
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