Do you think what job someone has determined who they are?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I don\'t know what your hormwork mean?
I understood your question was who decided your job? or who give a direction to decide the job what you want?
If it is true, I think it is a broadcasting like a CNN these days.
We can see all of the world on TV. So TV affects
to children. They have a dream from TV person as like actor, reporter, a famous persons . .
When I was in a child, I also had a dream to be a reporter.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I understood your question was who decided your job?
If it is true, I think it is a broadcasting like a CNN these days.
We can see all of the world on TV.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I don\'t know what your hormwork mean?
>> I don\'t know what your homework means?
I understood your question was who decided your job?
>> I understood your question was about who decided your job?
or who give a direction to decide the job what you want?
>> Or who gives a direction to decide the job that you want?
If it is true, I think it is a broadcasting like a CNN these days.
>> If it is true, I think it is broadcasting like a CNN news these days.
We can see all of the world on TV.
>> We can see the world on TV.
So TV affects to children.
>> So TV shows affect children.
They have a dream from TV person as like actor, reporter, a famous persons .
>> They get their dreams from a person on TV like an actor, a reporter, or a famous person.
When I was in a child, I also had a dream to be a reporter.
>> When I was a child, I also dreamed to be a reporter.
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