Do you think what job someone has determines who they are?
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I think that someone can\'t determine one\'s job. Because choice is a right of children. If a kid follow his parent\'s job, I think that it is just his interest.
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I think that someone can\'t determine one\'s job. Because choice is a right of children. If a kid follow his parent\'s job, I think that it is just his interest.
>> I think that someone can\'t determine one\'s job because it\'s the children\'s right to make their own choice. If a kid followed his parent\'s job, I think he was interested in the first place.
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