Do you think winter affects your working efficiency? How?

2026-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Do you think winter affects your working efficiency? How? The answer is “Yes. In some parts.” This warehouse keeps it’s temperature insisting 20-25 degrees for ambient products. Cold products are in 2-8degrees places and insist their degrees every time. Therefore, we can move outbound products easily in winter than in summer. And also, we can receive inbound products in the same ways. However, It is not different in the warehouse inside because the temperature is always the same degrees.

강사 첨삭

The answer is “Yes. In some parts.”

>> CORRECT

OR >> Yes, partially.

This warehouse keeps it’s temperature insisting 20-25 degrees for ambient products.
>> This warehouse maintains its temperature at 20–25°C for ambient products.

OR >> The warehouse keeps the temperature between 20 and 25°C for ambient products.

Cold products are in 2-8degrees places and insist their degrees every time.
>> Cold products are stored at 2–8°C and maintained at this temperature at all times.

OR >> Cold products are kept at 2–8°C consistently.

Therefore, we can move outbound products easily in winter than in summer.
>> Therefore, we can move outbound products more easily in winter than in summer.

OR >> As a result, moving outbound products is easier in winter than in summer.

And also, we can receive inbound products in the same ways.
>> We can also receive inbound products in the same way.

OR >> Similarly, inbound products can be handled the same way.

However, It is not different in the warehouse inside because the temperature is always the same degrees.

>> However, inside the warehouse, it is no different because the temperature remains constant.

OR >> Inside the warehouse, the temperature is always the same, so there is no difference.

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