Do you think women need a lot of clothes?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the more clothes, the better. The clothes can express many thing about the person. That the reason i\'m interested in clothes and enjoy shopping. Sometimes my clothes make me better person. so i think not only women need a lot of clothes but also men.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sandy!
I agree! But when I reached my 30\'s, I don\'t shop a lot of clothes anymore.
I often shop kitchen wares or stuff for my kitchen - hahaha.
Thank you!
I think the more clothes, the better.
>>> CORRECT!
The clothes can express many thing about the person.
>>> The clothes can express many things about the person.
That the reason i\'m interested in clothes and enjoy shopping.
>>> That\'s the reason I\'m interested in clothes and enjoy shopping.
Sometimes my clothes make me better person.
>>> Sometimes my clothes make me a better person.
so i think not only women need a lot of clothes but also men.
>>> So I think not only women but also men need a lot of clothes.
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