Do you think working multiple jobs is a personal choice or a societal pressure?
학생이 쓴 원문
No one don\'t want to work voluntarily.
However, we have to work to live.
It is social structure.
If someone seek multiple job, it means needing more money.
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No one don\'t want to work voluntarily.
>> No one wants to work voluntarily.
However, we have to work to live.
>> CORRECT
>> However, working is necessary for living.
>> It is part of the social structure.
If someone seek multiple job, it means needing more money.
>> If someone seeks multiple jobs, it means they need more money.
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