Do you think you are a helpful person?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think so. Honestly, since I was young I have like to give a hand to people who are in need. Thus when I was in college I volunteered in a disabled center as a caregiver and cleaner and it was my pleasure. Hence, I chose my career and I feel a sense of satisfaction. I believe that when I help people, I receive the perfect thing like happiness, pride and many more.
강사 첨삭
Hello there again [이름]!
Finding joy in helping people is actually a very noble thing. Only a few people can genuinely have a heart to find satisfaction in handling lives of other people. So I salute you in every way for being a nurse!
Continue serving others to the best that you can and you will be greatly rewarded.
Thanks for the short and very substantial answer to today\'s question.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Honestly, since I was young I have like to give a hand to people who are in need.
>> Honestly, since I was young, I have liked to give a hand to people who are in need.
Thus when I was in college I volunteered in a disabled center as a caregiver and cleaner and it was my pleasure.
>> Correct!
Or: ... and it was a great pleasure.
Hence, I chose my career and I feel a sense of satisfaction.
>> Correct!
I believe that when I help people, I receive the perfect thing like happiness, pride and many more.
>> Correct!
Or: ...perfect things...
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