Do you think you are a persistent person? Why or why not?
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I think I\'m a persistent person in most field.
Because when other people see me, they say I\'m a tenacious person, and I spend more time sitting in a chair and focusing on something than others. For example, when I was childhood, the piano teacher made me practice 100 time for the parts that I didn\'t do well in the piano academy, but I had the experience of practicing 100 times while crying until the end.
However, I think the field I hate is less persistent or patient than the field I like. Because I easily lose interest.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts regarding the homework question that was sent. I sincerely appreciate it. You did well in making your essay. I just did some corrections to make them better. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I think I\'m a persistent person in most field.
>> I think I’m a persistent person in most fields.
Because when other people see me, they say I\'m a tenacious person, and I spend more time sitting in a chair and focusing on something than others.
>> CORRECT.
For example, when I was childhood, the piano teacher made me practice 100 time for the parts that I didn\'t do well in the piano academy, but I had the experience of practicing 100 times while crying until the end.
>> For example, when I was a child, my piano teacher made me practice the parts I didn\'t do well 100 times at the piano academy, and I remember practicing while crying until the end.
However, I think the field I hate is less persistent or patient than the field I like.
>> However, I think I am less persistent and patient in fields I dislike than in fields I like.
Because I easily lose interest.
>> CORRECT.
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