Do you think you are good at adapting to new changes?
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Do you think you are good at adapting to new changes?
When I was teenager, I was feared about something new change. Such as I went to high school in another area far from my home. So, I lived in a dormitory with school friends. I felt lonely and always I want to go home. But, after 1 month, I was adapted my situation, and lean on my friends. So, in those days, I endured due to my friends.
After my adult life, I’m relatively good at adapting to new change. When I was 20 years old, In the university dorm life was very comfortable for me. And when I got a job, worked in another area too. So, that time I lived alone. But that moment was so hard for me. Because the new environment, and new peoples are very difficult to me. thus, I’m very effected by around environment.
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Thank you for this [이름] [이름]. Adapting to a new environment is indeed a challenge. If you are an introvert, it\'s definitely harder. But you made it. So, well done!
When I was teenager, I was feared about something new change. Such as I went to high school in another area far from my home.
>>> When I was a teenager, I had a fear about new changes such as going to a new high school in another area far from my home.
So, I lived in a dormitory with school friends.
>>> correct
I felt lonely and always I want to go home.
>>> I felt lonely and I always wanted to go home.
But, after 1 month, I was adapted my situation, and lean on my friends.
>>> But, after one month, I adapted to my situation and leaned on my friends.
>>> OR: But after a month, I have adapted to my situation and leaned on my friends.
So, in those days, I endured due to my friends.
>>> correct
After my adult life, I’m relatively good at adapting to new changes.
After my adult life, I’m relatively good at adapting to new changes.
>>> correct
When I was 20 years old, in the university dorm, life was very comfortable for me.
>>> correct
>>> OR: When I was 20 years old, life in the university dorm was very comfortable for me.
And when I got a job, I worked in another area too.
>>> correct
So, that time I lived alone.
>>> So at that time, I lived alone.
But that moment was so hard for me. Because the new environment, and new peoples are very difficult to me.
>>> But that moment was so hard for me because the new environment and new people were very difficult to me.
thus, I’m very effected by around environment.
>>> Thus, I’m very affected by the surrounding environment.
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