Do you think you are good at managing your time?

2020-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think I was good at managing my time for my work. I always wake up early at 5 am. I regulary do everything. If I miss something, I was very angry with myself. But since I got pregnancy, I became tolerant my self than before. But I was puntual time. Now, I sometimes miss to do because I set my son all day long. As time goes by, I belive it\'s OK because my son fall asleeps at about 8 pm lately. So, I\'m free at night.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Time management is indeed a skill.
- T. Beth
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I think I was good at managing my time for my work.
>> correct   
I always wake up early at 5 am. 
>> correct   
I regulary do everything. 
>> I regularly do everything. 
If I miss something, I was very angry with myself.
>>   If I miss something, I was very angry at myself. 
But since I got pregnancy, I became tolerant my self than before. 
>> But since I got pregnant, I became more tolerant to my self than before.    
But I was puntual time.
>> But I was punctual.    
Now, I sometimes miss to do because I set my son all day long.
>>  Now, I sometimes miss to do something because I set my schedule around my son all day long.  
As time goes by, I belive it\'s OK because my son fall asleeps at about 8 pm lately. 
>>   As time goes by, I believe it\'s okay because my son falls asleep at about 8 pm lately.  
So, I\'m free at night.
>>  correct  

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