Do you think you can be a good athlete is you are younger?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I never thought to be a athlete when I was young.
As I said, I am enjoying running & mountain tracking. These days, if I should have done a sports man, is it possoble to get a medal as like a Olympic game? I think maybe possible. It is not volleyball, basketball. Only it is long running as like 5000m 10000m 10 km.
I have a good legs. I can go a high place easely.
But, It will not get a medal at the Olympic.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
See you later today ^^
T. DON
I never thought to be a athlete when I was young.
>> I never thought to be an athlete when I was young.
As I said, I am enjoying running & mountain tracking. These days, if
I should have done a sports man, is it possoble to get a medal as like a
Olympic game? I think maybe possible. It is not volleyball, basketball.
Only it is long running as like 5000m 10000m 10 km.
>> As I said, I am enjoying running & mountain tracking. These days, if
I should have been a sportsman or an athlete, is it possible for me to get a medal in the Olympic game? I think maybe it is possible. It is not volleyball or basketball. It is only running like 5000m 10000m and 10 km.
I have a good legs. I can go a high place easely.
>> I have good legs. I can go to a high place easily.
But, It will not get a medal at the Olympic.
>> But, It will not get a medal at the Olympics.
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