Do you think you can change a major characteristic of your personality if you try?
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YOU SAY:
Yes, I think if I try to change my a major characteristic of my personality.
Maybe it takes a long time.
>> Yes, I think I can change the major characteristic of my personality if I will try. But it will definitely be along process.
Actually I am a person who can\'t satisfied about many things.
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Actually, I am a kind of person who cannot be easily satisfied with material things.
I am a Christian but I couldn\'t appreciate to God.
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I am [Name] but I don\'t think I am able to appreciate God.
One day I heard through the broadcasting one idol singer said she write one thankful thing every day before go to bed.
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One day I heard one of the singer that I like, she said she writes one thing that she is thankful for before going to bed.
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From then on I write five thankful things every day before go to bed.
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From that then on, I started writing 5 things that I am thankful for before going to bed.
At first it was very difficult to me.
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At first it was very difficult for me.
Anyway I have tried continually and little by little I can change a major characteristic of my personality.
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Anyway, I am continually trying and slowly I can definitely change the major characteristic of my personality.
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