Do you think you can live without your mobile or is it now an important part of your daily life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi !!! how are you?
I thought about the mobile using
I am answered your question “absolutely yes ”
Because the mobile is very important and big influence to me
The mobile have many informations so many people are used that informations
For example, we are used mobile about bank, delivery service, work, study and others
I am thought the mobile it is another world
Sometimes some people meet new love in mobile
Especially I am used mobile about entertainment,
For example watching TV dramas , movies and read books
The mobile can everything
Thank you for reading
See you~
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름].
I\'m doing great, thank you for asking.
How about you?
Thank you for answering this homework~
I hope you have a really good day today and tomorrow.
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>> CORRECT
I thought about the mobile using
>> I already thought about using a mobile phone.
I am answered your question “absolutely yes ”
>>My answer to your question is \"absolutely yes\".
Because the mobile is very important and big influence to me
>>I think mobiles are very important and have a big influence on me.
The mobile have many informations so many people are used that informations
>>Mobiles phones have a lot of information and many people use it.
For example, we are used mobile about bank, delivery service, work, study and others
>>For example, we use our mobiles for banking, for having delivery services, for working, for studying and others.
I am thought the mobile it is another world
>>I think that the mobile is another world.
Sometimes some people meet new love in mobile
>>Sometimes, people meet new partners on the mobile phone.
Especially I am used mobile about entertainment,
>>I usually use my mobile phone for entertainment.
For example watching TV dramas , movies and read books
>>For example, I like watching TV dramas or movies and reading books.
The mobile can everything
>>Mobiles can do everything.
Thank you for reading
>> CORRECT
See you~
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