Do you think you chose the right career path? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a elementary school student, my teacher took care of my class students doing her best.
It was so impressed that I want to be like her.
When It times to select the university\'s major, I collect only the department of education.
Among of these, I should go to the department of early childhood education.
But, when I have studied of this major, I though that it was not right for me.
Because early childhood teacher needs enormous power and kindness but I don\'t have confidence of that.
So I collect second major of english literature and two of the department of education.
I think that I don\'t say \'It is a really perfect path of me\' just now.
But, I want to say \'It is a good choice for me \' in the future.
강사 첨삭
Wow! That was impressive Nicole :)
Great job with your composition. Continue doing well!
~ T. Demi ^^
Great job with your composition. Continue doing well!
~ T. Demi ^^
When I was a elementary school student, my teacher took care of my class students doing her best.
>> When I was an elementary school student, my teacher did her best to care for my classmates.
It was so impressed that I want to be like her.
>> I was so impressed that I wanted to be like her.
When It times to select the university\'s major, I collect only the department of education.
>> When it was time to select my major, I only collected from the Department of Education.
Among of these, I should go to the department of early childhood education.
>> Among these, I chose the Department of Early Childhood Education.
But, when I have studied of this major, I though that it was not right for me.
>> But when I studied this major, I thought that it was not right for me.
Because early childhood teacher needs enormous power and kindness but I don\'t have confidence of that.
>> An Early Childhood teacher needs enormous power and kindness but I am not confident.
So I collect second major of english literature and two of the department of education.
>>So I chose my second major which is English Literature.
I think that I don\'t say \'It is a really perfect path of me\' just now.
>> I can\'t say that it\'s the perfect path for me yet.
But, I want to say \'It is a good choice for me \' in the future.
>> But I want to say that it\'s a good choice for my future.
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