Do you think you have a healthy life style?
학생이 쓴 원문
Now I have a healthy life style. I jog 2 times a week and I have meals at least two times a day.
And when I feel tired I try to take some rest as long as time permit. I manage to keep my mind and try to influence posively as far as I can. Even though I have some bad habit, I make an effort.
강사 첨삭
Hi Su ^^
Thank you for doing your composition :)
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Now I have a healthy life style.
>>> correct
I jog 2 times a week and I have meals at least two times a day.
>>> correct
And when I feel tired I try to take some rest as long as time permit.
>>> And when I feel tired I try to take some rest as long as time permits.
I manage to keep my mind and try to influence posively as far as I can.
>>> I manage to keep my mind and try to influence positivity as far as I can.
Even though I have some bad habit, I make an effort.
>>> Even though I have some bad habits, I make an effort.
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