Do you think you have enough time to do the things you want to do? Why or why not?
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I think that I have not so many enough time to do all things that I want to do. Because Sometimes I don\'t even touch my phone at 1 day. So that means sometimes I\'m very busy. And when that happen, I forgot to do games by m phone. d: 😄😄
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I think that I have not so many enough time to do all things that I want to do.
>>> I think I don\'t have enough time to do all things that I want to do.
Because Sometimes I don\'t even touch my phone at 1 day.
>>> Because sometimes I can\'t even touch my phone for a whole day.
So that means sometimes I\'m very busy.
>>> CORRECT!
And when that happen, I forgot to do games by m phone.
>>> And when that happen, I forgot to play games on my phone.
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