Do you think you would be able to help your parents if you moved out of your house and get your own
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No. I think my parents will more worry about me. I can’t help by move out house myself now. Later when Im ready to move out and more older, I will move out. And that time my parents will happy maybe!
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No. I think my parents will more worry about me.
>> No, I think my parents will worry more about me.
I can’t help by move out house myself now. Later when Im ready to move out and more older, I will move out.
>>> I can\'t help by moving out of the house now. Later, when I get older and ready, then I will move out.
And that time my parents will happy maybe!
>>> And at that time, maybe my parents will be happy!
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