Do you think young children need to have their own gadgets, such as laptops or tablets? Why?
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I think children don\'t need their own gadgets because it is not healthy and bad to balanced development of brain.
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Do you think young children need to have their own gadgets, such as laptops or tablets? Why?
I think children don\'t need their own gadgets because it is not healthy and bad to balanced development of brain.
>> I think children don\'t need their own gadgets because it is not healthy and bad for the balanced development of the brain.
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