Do you think your country has a good education system. What are its strengths and weaknesses?
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My country has a good education system, it is quite helpful to study for every students. Most students can get a chance only to focus on studying. but some students compete strongly with others.
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Do you think your country has a good education system. What are its strengths and weaknesses?
My country has a good education system, it is quite helpful to study for every students.
>>My country has a good education system which is quite helpful to every student.
Most students can get a chance only to focus on studying.
>>Most students can get a chance to focus only in studying.
but some students compete strongly with others.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>But some students are strongly competitive with others.
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