Do you think your country is prepared for a possible coronavirus outbreak?
학생이 쓴 원문
Absolutely Not. I\'ve seen the article that said about 6000 people who escaped from Wuhan before the blockade is coming to Korea now. And also in our city I heard that guy who is suspected of the disease has gone to the hospital. This is a very serious problem. Since there is a WHO regulation that no country could block other country\'s citizen just only because of the disease, We can\'t stop Chinese coming to Korea. We are defenseless. So I think we should quarantine everyone who is coming from China for a week. Also, designating the place where people who came from China to live is also a good measure.
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]! This is a bright idea.
~Teacher James
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I\'ve seen the article that said about 6000 people who escaped from Wuhan before the blockade is coming to Korea now.
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And also in our city I heard that guy who is suspected of the disease has gone to the hospital.
>>> And also in our city, I heard that a guy who is suspected of the disease has gone to the hospital.
This is a very serious problem. Since there is a WHO regulation that no country could block other country\'s citizen just only because of the disease, We can\'t stop Chinese coming to Korea.
>>> This is a very serious problem. Since there is a WHO regulation that no country could block other country\'s citizens just only because of the disease, We can\'t stop Chinese coming to Korea.
We are defenseless.
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So I think we should quarantine everyone who is coming from China for a week.
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Also, designating the place where people who came from China to live is also a good measure.
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>>OR: Also, designating the place where people who came from China to live is also a good decision.
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