Do you think your neighborhood is safe? What kind of crimes happen in your area?
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: Answer these questions in 3-5 sentences. I will be more than happy
to read your composition and correct the errors for you.
Do you think your neighborhood is safe? What kind of crimes happen in your area?
I think my neighborhood is usually safe because police station is in the my neighborhood.
But my neighborhood is new town. Many building is constructing. So I\'m a little scared when I walk in late time.
I don\'t know what crimes happen in my area because I moved to this house recently.
I think hit and run can happen during night time. Many cars are speeding due to wide road and few people.
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Good afternoon, [이름]. Great job in doing your homework. Continue improving your grammar and writing skills. See you later in class. ^_^
I think my neighborhood is usually safe because police station is in the my neighborhood.
>>>I think my neighborhood is usually safe because there\'s a police station in my neighborhood.
But my neighborhood is new town.
>>>But my neighborhood is a new town.
Many building is constructing.
>>>Many buildings are being constructed.
So I\'m a little scared when I walk in late time.
>>So, I\'m a little scared when I walk late at night.
I don\'t know what crimes happen in my area because I moved to this house recently.
>>>I don\'t know what crimes happen in my area because I just recently moved in this house.
Many cars are speeding due to wide road and few people.
>>>Many cars are speeding up due to wide roads and few people.
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