Do you think your relationship with Japan will ever improve?
학생이 쓴 원문
Before I don\'t care about interaction with Japan because the history which Korea was under the colonial occupation by the Japanese empire is just past and my Japanese friends salways behave to me very gently and nicely. However, though my friends are nice, I think, I might have kind of prejudice in terms of Japanese because of the historical facts. Furthermore, nowadays, Japan announced restrictions on hi-tect materials exported to Korea. As this conflict is becoming serious, many Korean including me call for bycott of Fapaneses cars, beer and cosmetics. Korea goverment have some problems linked Japan such as military sexaual slavery by Japan, the argument about Dokdo island which Japan contieously insist on their territory are still remained. So, if Japan goverment revoke the announcement and apologize their past faults with reasonable compensation, Korea should be a good partner regarding various parts again and I will also change my mind and thier impression I have.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jin. Thank you for this. This historical conflict between you and Japan seem to never end. Both countries are very sensitive with regards to this issue.
-T. Beth
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Before I don\'t care about interaction with Japan because the history which Korea was under the colonial occupation by the Japanese empire is just past and my Japanese friends salways behave to me very gently and nicely.>>> OR: Before, I didn\'t care about interactions with Japanese because the history where Korea was under Japanese colonization is in the past and my Japanese friends always treat me gently and nicely.
However, though my friends are nice, I think, I might have kind of prejudice in terms of Japanese because of the historical facts.
>>> However, though my friends are nice, I think I might have a kind of prejudice against Japanese because of the historical facts.
Furthermore, nowadays, Japan announced restrictions on hi-tect materials exported to Korea.
>>> Furthermore, nowadays, Japan announced restrictions on hi-tech materials exported to Korea.
As this conflict is becoming serious, many Korean including me call for bycott of Fapaneses cars, beer and cosmetics.
>>> OR: As this conflict is becoming serious, many Koreans including me call for boycott on Japanese products such as cars, beer and cosmetics.
Korea goverment have some problems linked Japan such as military sexaual slavery by Japan, the argument about Dokdo island which Japan contieously insist on their territory are still remained.
>>> The Korea government have some problems linked to Japan such as military sexual slavery by Japan and the argument about Dokdo island which Japan continuously insist as their territory still remain.
So, if Japan goverment revoke the announcement and apologize their past faults with reasonable compensation, Korea should be a good partner regarding various parts again and I will also change my mind and thier impression I have.
>>> So, if the Japanese government revoke the announcement and apologize about their past faults with reasonable compensation, Korea should be a good partner regarding various parts again and I will also change my mind and the impression I have on them.
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