Do you think your status in life is different now if you are good in English since you are young?

2021-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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Dear [Name], I think \'Yes\'. In Korea there are a lot of foreigner companies. The entry condition is a good skill to speak in English. I had a lot of chance to meet foreigner friends when I was working in that company. But My English skill was poor, so I could not commnicate them with freely. I had a several chance to entry a foreigner company with promotion position. But I couldn\'t do it, because of English interview. I was worried about it.

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Hi there again [이름]!

I have more time today to check your composition. See you ^^

T. DON

Dear [Name],
I think \'Yes\'. In Korea there are a lot of foreigner companies. The entry condition is a good skill to speak in English. I had a lot of chance to meet foreigner friends when I was working in that company. But My English skill was poor, so I could not commnicate them with freely.
>> I think \'Yes\'. In Korea there are a lot of foreign companies. The entry condition is a good skill to speak in English. I had a lot of chance to meet foreigner friends when I was working in that company. But My English skill was poor, so I could not communicate them freely.


I had a several chance to entry a foreigner company with promotion position. But I couldn\'t do it, because of English interview.
>> I had several chances to enter in a foreign company with position. But I couldn\'t do it, because of English interview.


I was worried about it.
>> CORRECT

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