Do you try to buy environmentally friendly products? If so, please give some examples.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually today\'s homework makes me think of what kind of person I were. I realized that I\'m not a person who think about our environment much. I only can think of recycle toilet rolls which I use at the optical shop where I work. I realized that I should think more environmentally friendly products before I go shopping. So I made my mind that I\'m going to use echo bag from today for my grocery shopping.
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Good afternoon, [이름]!^^
Your answer to your homework made me smile. In a way, I\'m happy that you realized that. ^_^ Keep on expressing your ideas because they\'re good. ^_^
Actually today\'s homework makes me think of what kind of person I were.
>>> Actually, today\'s homework makes me think of what kind of person I was.
I realized that I\'m not a person who think about our environment much.
>>>I realized that I\'m not the person who thinks about our environment much.
I only can think of recycle toilet rolls which I use at the optical shop where I work.
>>>I can only think of recycle toilet rolls which I use at the optical shop where I work.
So I made my mind that I\'m going to use echo bag from today for my grocery shopping.
>>>So I made up my mind that I\'m going to use Eco bag from today for my grocery shopping.
OR>>> So I made up my mind that I\'m going to use Eco bag from now on for my grocery shopping.
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