Do you usually get depressed in winter?
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I am tend to get depressed in winter.
The reasons are as follows.
Firstly, my eomotion easily get influenced by weather. In winter, the weather is usally gloomy and turned to be dark in the very early time.
Secondly, due to cold weather outdoor activity decreased so the amount of sun dimished and I am in my room with less activity.
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I am tend to get depressed in winter.
>>> I tend to get depressed in winter.
The reasons are as follows.
>>> CORRECT =)
Firstly, my eomotion easily get influenced by weather.
>>> Firstly, my emotions easily get influenced by weather.
In winter, the weather is usally gloomy and turned to be dark in the very early time.
>>> In winter, the weather, is usually gloomy and it turns dark at a very early time.
Secondly, due to cold weather outdoor activity decreased so the amount of sun dimished and I am in my room with less activity.
>>> Secondly, due to the cold weather, the number of outdoor activities lessened, sun exposure decreased, and I stay in my room with less activity.
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