Do you usually offer help or favor to others?

2020-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

There are fifty-fifty. When I went to work, I was in charge of management-department. So, I had to offer favor to other tems to compile documents everyday. If I got some documents from specific department on time, I had to press for this. Sometimes some people used to be critisized to me why I pressed hurriedly. But this was my work. And then I finished work on time. I\'m on maternity leave now. I always offer help to my honey and my mom to take care of my son. I think that they give many helps for me

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Giving help and receiving help should go both ways. It\'s good to know you have people around you who are always ready to help.

- T. Beth

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There are fifty-fifty.

>>> It is fifty-fifty.
When I went to work, I was in charge of management-department.

>>> When I used to work, I was in charge of the management-department.

So, I had to offer favor to other tems to compile documents everyday.

>>> So, I had to offer favor to other teams to compile documents everyday.

If I got some documents from specific department on time, I had to press for this.

>>> If I got some documents from specific department on time and I had to be pressured for this.

Sometimes some people used to be critisized to me why I pressed hurriedly.

>>> Sometimes some people used to criticize me for pressuring them to hurry.
But this was my work.

>>> correct

And then I finished work on time.
>>> OR: Only then can I finish my work on time.
I\'m on maternity leave now.

>>> correct
I always offer help to my honey and my mom to take care of my son.

>>> I am always offered help by my honey and my mom to take care of my son.
I think that they give many helps for me

>>> I think that I receive a lot of help from them.

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