Do you walk every day?
학생이 쓴 원문
Honestly, I rarely take a walk or exercise outside in my daily life.
However, I almost do simple yoga and stretching at home every day.
In addition, I walk the road which is famous to be beautiful or climb the mountain when I have free time.
I think a lot about work, students, lectures, the future, and others during walking and climbing there.
It\'s reason that I walk the road and climb the mountains.
강사 첨삭
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Learning through your mistakes is the way to go.
I\'m glad you always take your homework seriously.
You are truly a model learner.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Honestly, I rarely take a walk or exercise outside in my daily life.
>> Correct
However, I almost do simple yoga and stretching at home every day.
However, I almost do simple yoga and stretching at home every day.
>> However, I do simple yoga and stretching at home almost every day.
In addition, I walk the road which is famous to be beautiful or climb the mountain when I have free time.
In addition, I walk the road which is famous to be beautiful or climb the mountain when I have free time.
>> In addition, I walk on the road which is famous for its beauty or climb a mountain when I have free time.
I think a lot about work, students, lectures, the future, and others during walking and climbing there.
I think a lot about work, students, lectures, the future, and others during walking and climbing there.
>> I think a lot about work, students, lectures, the future, and others while I\'m walking and climbing.
It\'s reason that I walk the road and climb the mountains.
It\'s reason that I walk the road and climb the mountains.
>> They are the reasons why I walk on roads and climb mountains.
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