Do you want a busy leisure time or a relaxed one? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I’m a very impulsive person, so it depends on how I feel from day to day. However, if I have to choose between the two, i prefer a relaxed leisure because I get tired easily.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Judy!
I am sure that most people prefer leisure having some relaxed time and just doing the things they like.
Leisure is for pleasure. Thus, enjoy all the time you can doing the things you love.
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
However, if I have to choose between the two, i prefer a relaxed leisure because I get tired easily.
>> Correct!
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