Do you want to attend an international school?
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No, I don\'t. It\'s because it will be tired to speak English everyday during the class and if I go there, it becomes too hard to get a job because nowadays, natural sciences are trend. Also, my parents oppose about it. So I don\'t want to go there.
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Hi, Daisy. Thank you so much for doing your homework and for doing a great job in answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
No, I don\'t.
>> Correct
It\'s because it will be tired to speak English everyday during the class and if I go there, it becomes too hard to get a job because nowadays, natural sciences are trend.
>> It\'s because speaking English every day during class can be tiring, and I worry that finding a job may be challenging because natural sciences are currently in demand.
Also, my parents oppose about it. So I don\'t want to go there.
>> Also, my parents oppose it, so I don\'t want to go there
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