Do you want to be a firefighter?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to, though. I think firefighters need to be responsible and selfless. These qualities are not easy, and that\'s why it\'s meaningful. It\'s something I need to work on.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름],
Firefighters are the bravest people.
I hope that all firefighters, especially the ones from Los Angeles, will be safe.
Andrea
I want to, though.
>> I want to.
I think firefighters need to be responsible and selfless.
>> Correct
These qualities are not easy, and that\'s why it\'s meaningful.
>> Correct
It\'s something I need to work on.
>> Correct
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