Do you want to be a queen? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I do want to be a queen. I want to teach the bad people not to \'make fun of poor people in a severe way\'. In Korea, we select presidents like U.S. I\'ll like it when I become the president because it is like being the new-type queen of Korea. I will forbid drinking dirty water, and juices. I will make my country, Korea, safe when I become president someday.
강사 첨삭
Good day to you Heather! Everything is possible. Just believe in yourself and you will achieve your dreams. Continue to dream high! People around you will definitely support you.~ T. Lyn
I do want to be a queen.
>>I want to be a queen.
I want to teach the bad people not to \'make fun of poor people in a severe way\'.
>>I want to teach bad people not to make fun of or make a serious mockery of the poor.
In Korea, we select presidents like U.S.
>>In Korea, we select our president like in the U.S.
I\'ll like it when I become the president because it is like being the new-type queen of Korea.
>>If I become president, I think I will like it because it is like being the new type of queen in Korea.
I will forbid drinking dirty water, and juices.
>>I will forbid drinking dirty water and unhealthy beverages.
I will make my country, Korea, safe when I become president someday.
>>If I become the president someday, I will make my country, the Republic of Korea, safe.
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