Do you want to be a Queen? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I don\'t want to be a queen. Because it is very pressure to do that. And a queens need to have a political knowledge, to know about generation flow and smart. So I don\'t want to be a queen.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Thank you for always sending me your homework. Great job! ^^
~Teacher Erin
No, I don\'t want to be a queen.
>>CORRECT
Because it is very pressure to do that.
>>CORRECT
And a queens need to have a political knowledge,
>>And queens need to have political knowledge.
to know about generation flow and smart.
>>You need to be smart, and you need to know about the generation flow.
So I don\'t want to be a queen.
>>CORRECT
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